Is my poem OK for Yr standards?

In a new land i stepped

no one to turn to

but myself

eyes glanced at me

but scampered away as fast

for my tongue was not fluid enough

to enunciate my convictions

but the clock ticked

and the same eyes glanced

and those glances became gazes

and with them

i shook hands with

the people of the new land

i may not be perfect

i may come from somewhere else

i may be just a random guy

but you wouldn’t understand

because

it’s me, myself and I

Update:

its a free verse poem..so no rhyming used

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  • beautiful

  • I like it. My favorite thing about it is that IT DOESN’T RHYME!!! That keeps it from feeling stilted or “forced.” 🙂

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