Does this t-shirt look good?

ok so i made my fren a t-shirt for her birthday! the link to see the shirt is below

http://falloutboyfangirl.deviantart.com/art/FAL…

please look at it and crtique it! is it too cluttered? more color or design? does it look like a t-shirt? please let me know your opinion!

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  • it looks like a postcard, tbh.

    I think there should be more colours, and make it personalized to her. like which songs she likes most, or which person she likes most (I < Patrick!). so maybe on the back, you could write like “Team Patrick”, in my case.

    I don’t think you should choose black and purple, they kind of blend. I would choose a black shirt, then make the FALL OUT BOY white, so that it has the most contrast and more eye-catching. the rest of the stuff on the front should be light colours, like blue or pink or lavender. the Team Patrick part too, could be white since it’s at the back.

    Hope this helps!

    PS – wish her happy birthday for me! (;

    Source(s): Art class, which I can’t believe I can still remember cause I hated my Art teacher and personal tastes.

  • I agree with the other person, songs names, take them out. And try something diff with the drop shadow. Like the design though. I hope this isn’t gay coming from a guy lol.

  • It’s very nice! I would take out the song names though, they look kind of stupid. But overall, good job.

  • haha

    I love it 😀

    I hate FOB,

    but this is super cute [:

    you should add/change the colors maybe?

    just a suggestion.

    Source(s): thank you for answering my question 😀

  • its rele cute! it’s a good design:)

    good job!

    but, it is a little cluttered:/

  • I dont like FOB…but yea its coool (: i like the colors.

  • i love it!!

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