is this a good short poem?

you smoke too much

is what my neighbour

crawled out of his yard

early day in summers


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  • I’m really sorry, but no not really. It has no flow or rhyme. 🙁

  • hey dont be dishearted we are here to make out a better even best poets well its a nice attempt you can do even better its like a baked cake still it needs icing plus wrote poem when you get emotional and you feel sth about sth study poetic devices before writing poems it will help you alot

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