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It has come to my attention that the bull fighting event that you are organising at the beach of Cascais City, is causing chaos and problems amongst some tourists and local people there. I would like to see an end to it.

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  • The bull fighting event that you are organising at the beach of Cascais City, has attracted my attention to the utmost importance. Chaos and many problems have been caused and is affecting the many tourists and local people there. It would please me to know that this event is put to an end immediately.

  • my attention has come to the bull fighting event organised at cascais city whch is causing uncomfortableness among tourist n i want a check on these events

  • please note that the bull fighting event that you organising to take place at beach of Cacais City is causing considerable problems for tourists and local people there. I would join them in expessing a desire to see the end of it.

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