kinda miss my ex bf that’s missing someone else “i think” .. so i wrote this .. please tell me is it good ?.. i’m tryin’ to put it in a song or make it a song like rapping with piano in the background
P.S i’m not sendin’ it to him or any thing .. i just feel good when i write down how i feel .. thnx and here it is
what can I say when you’re my everything and you don’t even know
tell me if you were me , would you move on or hold on
oh I remember me blushing because you held my hand
now you’re not even close .. i’m writing your name on the sand
7abibi I remember laying your head on my shoulder and
telling me you love me .. I told you I loved you so
but I was feeling so much more
that’s why when we broke up , I’ve never spoke
cuz I’m afraid that what I felt was not your goal
maybe you just had fun .. maybe you’re a player boy
still everytime you write (( I miss you )) I think it’s for me
but I think really deep and I figure out that
if you wanted me to feel it .. why would it be on your wall ?
if you wanted me to hear it .. why didn’t you call ?
that’s why I don’t want to tell you how I feel
it may be funny for you .. and maybe you’d freak
I guess I’ll always have this secret in my heart
hoping that someday you’ll come and say
the words I wrote were for you all the way
but until that day , I’ll keep you as a friend
cuz I really appreciate it .. I don’t want it to end
hoping you’ll always be happy
yea .. hope it for me too
til’ fate gather us .. I’ll be missing you
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that’s really lovely! and very heart touching. this is just how i felt for a very long time until me and my ex finally got back together.
cherish that if he is still in your life, you still get to talk.
if you still see each other, show him that he makes you into a ray of sunshine.
it’s not easy if you are so in love and you cannot show it to him, telling him how you feel may only scare him away.
if he looks deep in your eyes, he will see exactly how you feel. same goes if you look deep in his!
eyes are the open door to the heart of every soul.