Instilled in my heart, mighty vigor
Noble and true, mighty vigor
Upon my cheek, sole drop of tear
One and only, last drop of tear.
A simple part
Thats from the heart
May seem so small
But is so tall
Just like the tear
Thats on your cheek
One simple tear
I hear so clear
Which poem sounds nice? or ?
🥇 Favorite Answer
I like the second one better!!! It is more refined I think. Your work is pretty 😉 The only thing weird is that is goes rhyming very prettily and then “cheek” all alone?! Well I quite did not understand that but it is the only defect I could find to it 🙂
Source(s): I am a poet girl myself!
I like number . I don’t feel the repetition works well enough in number . You need to add an apostrophe in thats like this: that’s. Also think that the last line should be I see so clear because you cannot hear a tear. I like your work. Keep writing.
Source(s): I am a poet and I have taught poetry.