Which poem sounds nice?

Poem

Instilled in my heart, mighty vigor

Noble and true, mighty vigor

Upon my cheek, sole drop of tear

One and only, last drop of tear.

Poem

A simple part

Thats from the heart

May seem so small

But is so tall

Just like the tear

Thats on your cheek

One simple tear

I hear so clear

Which poem sounds nice? or ?

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  • I like the second one better!!! It is more refined I think. Your work is pretty 😉 The only thing weird is that is goes rhyming very prettily and then “cheek” all alone?! Well I quite did not understand that but it is the only defect I could find to it 🙂

    Source(s): I am a poet girl myself!

  • I like number . I don’t feel the repetition works well enough in number . You need to add an apostrophe in thats like this: that’s. Also think that the last line should be I see so clear because you cannot hear a tear. I like your work. Keep writing.

    Source(s): I am a poet and I have taught poetry.

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